epic fail?

This is the note I got back on my last assignment for media writing:
Helga: This should be in proper paragraph form. You are lucky I have decided not to deduct a full 50 per cent. You need the marks.

Shiiiit.

Oh well, I'm so exited for todayyyy.
Going to a show downtown then going to get hammered on residence.
Wooo :)

I fail at school.